My First Love Poem by Marieta Maglas

My First Love

Rating: 5.0


Chirping birds,
Trembling leaves
In the middle of the darkness
Yearning for something,
Warm breeze of summer
And the rush of the sea,
A shiver inside
This love, which still exists
After so many years,
An intense chemistry
And a psychic emotion,
A pure illuminated state of mind
And a real enlightenment
Of our souls
Can be existent
Only with you.

Poem by Marieta Maglas

Monday, June 21, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: love educates
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saadat Tahir 13 July 2010

a mixture of so many......felings and visions....rolling out.. bliss...great lines cheers

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 03 July 2010

Find the gleams from Veda [1] This love still existent ~ In-built always [2] A pure illuminated state of mind ~ When awakened [3] Of our souls/Only with you. ~ Highest Concept [in uppercase] Thanks sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Eyan Desir 25 June 2010

Wow, well express great write...a+

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Amazing experience...reminded me my first love...Bravo...

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Marieta Maglas

Marieta Maglas

Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania
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