A Delicate Rainy Morning Poem by Marieta Maglas

A Delicate Rainy Morning

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If I felt that you had been here,
it was because your angel would have touched me with his wing like a breeze,
and
you would have been here with him
in an indestructible sensation.
Maybe you thought if the angel had told me,
I would have known,
but he wouldn't have said anything.
He would never tell me,
but I've been waiting for you,
to give me your love
in rainy mornings
with hopeless awakes...

Copyright © Marieta Maglas. All rights reserved.

Thursday, June 4, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: angel
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 20 November 2015

The angel had his own way of telling me about the poet's muse but the man had his own limitations. Very well explained. Thanks. but I've been waiting for you, to give me your love

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Melvina Germain 12 June 2015

Beautiful sister, just beautiful. A feeling of tranquility came over me as I read this gem of a poem...thank you for the treat.....

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Daniel Brick 23 June 2015

Calling this a Blues Poem is very appropriate. At a concert many years ago the Blues singer Taj Mahal told us the Blues can be many things but they ALWAYS have to be s-w-e-e-t, and your poem is suffused with sweetness peeking through the sadness of a lost opportunity for love/affection/sharing. I noticed you used the helping verb WOULD five times in 13 lines - that verb precisely expresses the sadness of lost opportunity. But the movement of this poem has a compelling counter-rhythm expressed in the sheer loveliness of the DELICATE RAINY MORNING. Do you know Shakespeare's line MERCY DROPPETH AS THE GENTLE RAIN FROM HEAVEN TO THE PLACE BELOW? That's the counter-rhythm which saves the poem from abject sadness so the sweet blues can work their magic and salvage some happiness in the promise of love in the future. This rainfall is shining!

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Maria Gonzalez 28 July 2015

Very touching and well written.

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Anil Kumar Panda 20 November 2015

Very nice. Falling in love with rain gives immense pleasure.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 March 2019

Cloud is an angel who touches us with raindrops. The rainy day imagery is beautifully drawn in this poem. This is an excellent sharing done here.

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Robin Rambles On 22 June 2018

I love this especially the line towards the bottom in rainy morning hopeless awakes

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Bipasha D 13 April 2018

A beautiful piece. So soothing and delicate. Loved the title as well.

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Simone Inez Harriman 03 March 2018

A stunning poem worthy of the attention recieved from so many comments and favorites.I love the sense of delicacy and lightness of being that prevails in this beautiful write. Thank you dear poetess for this lovely poem.

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Dr Antony Theodore 22 December 2016

the delicate fine way of describing the deep feelings of the heart comparing with the rainy morning........ lovely art.. thank you dear poetess

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Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania
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