My First Time Poem by rachel sanler

My First Time

Rating: 5.0


I feel excited, yes i really do
I wish you could see the excitement,
just between me, and you
I know that my poems, are not as good as yours
But when you get to know me.you'll see
that I respect all the laws

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Henry Brown 18 July 2009

Man I like it You got talent

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Mitwaly Osman 18 May 2009

Not very bad for a start.. And I think that my very first poem is something i don't wanna talk about.. haha Just lil practice and you'll be all right.. Two thumbs up!

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