My Folly Poem by me poet yeps poet

My Folly

Rating: 5.0


How did I plant
that seed
within the depths of my heart
unknowingly perhaps
but now it has grown
into a fungus
which has no death

why did one think
the other one was at fault
when thebrain of mine
grew so thin

the synapse's withered from within
why should now I blame others
for my folly

he is the fruit of knowledge
I a minuscule seed
may or may not flourish
in this garden
evolved by Eve

in all Creations
glory

Monday, November 5, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: death,evil,god,integrity,poet,poetic expression,thoughts
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Notes
An unavoidable occurrence
one of now
REPENTANCE
But his progress hastens
Evey cloud has a silver lining....
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
me poet yeps poet 17 May 2021

How did I plant that seed within the depths of my heart unknowingly perhaps

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Varsha M 22 July 2020

I completely agree it all begins like a fungus multiplies in exponents only to kill the very organism it hosted. Why to blame other when I was the very wrong invitor. A very emotional and meaningful poem that touches heart. Great admirations and appreciations.

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Hazel Durham 18 November 2018

Superb write! The truth of our own folly is hard to accept but with God's kindness and forgiveness we have the strenth to overcome our mistakes! !

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 08 December 2018

Thank u Hazel so beautifully commented thanks ma'am

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