Tuesday, May 21, 2013

My Freedom (No.1) Comments

Rating: 4.5

Someone came and shot an arrow
What kind of freedom you need?

For a while I was silent and took
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Aftab Alam
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Wahab Abdul 23 May 2013

wow, you pick up from the 3rd stanza... and its a lovely thought.. love it..

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Sallam Yassin 22 May 2013

see. he don't know you man hhh great piece for peace / well done

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R.j. Wynn 22 May 2013

See, he was just hungry, poor guy.

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Valsa George 22 May 2013

A beautiful concept of freedom! ! No fuss about Faith or Religion! No narrow boundaries! ! Choosing one's own life and one's own death! ! The policy of 'Live and Let Live'! Great! !

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