Poet of the River

Rookie - 42 Points (july 27 1994 / California, but move around a lot.)

My Freedom(Sad) - Poem by Poet of the River

I am standing alone,
Take me home,
And end this life of mine,
I have my knife,
I'll take my life,
And i wont mess up this time.
Against my skin,
The bleeding begins,
And the puddle starts to grow.
As the blood continues to fall,
I hear the call,
And like the light in my eyes i just go..

Comments about My Freedom(Sad) by Poet of the River

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/21/2011 6:21:00 PM)

    hear the call,
    And like the light in my eyes i just go... oh nice lines..10

    you have to grow,
    with rivers flow
    line shine glow
    let with some one you go.......like it? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?
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  • (12/19/2011 8:12:00 PM)

    amazing poem... something that i know Crimson Love would like...
    but for me i absolutely adore it... so much meaing and crying out for someone to come to you...
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, December 18, 2011

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 19, 2012

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