Monday, July 21, 2008

My Greatest Love Comments

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I first fell in love when I was young in grade school
With nature whose magic and beauty was all around
Like a butterfly to the flowers I was drawn
Oh, the joy I felt, the joy I felt, the purest I’ve ever found.
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Vaughn Bekker 21 May 2010

i loved the first half of the poem, not that i didn`t the second, just i never saw it coming the way it ended, full of deep emotion, i enjoyed it, well written

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C T Heart 21 July 2008

A heart touched by different angels of beauty and sadness...nice write. Thanks... Heart

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Leonard Sims

Leonard Sims

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