Like a whisper among the clatter
Like a praise among the flatter
That is how you are to me
If the world is round then
You are the rim for me
Among the sounds
And heckles you are the
Supple symphony
A revelation for life
An endorsement unseen
Like smooth pedestal
But quite strong to feel
You are always near me
But never wish to be seen
Like a grail among the steins
Like a help among the rails
Like a whisper and the praise......
this poem is for my best friend, guide and everything... and one and only my mom.....
A nice poetic imagination, nishtha. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks
I am sorry for I could chance to read your magnificent poem only now. It's really special in that such a wonderful poem has been penned by a very young girl.Keep it up.Try writing more.You've got great talents.I'm sure you'll rise to great heights as a poet.Thanks and very best wishes.
excellent! I am really amazed reading this poem. Its wonderful! ! :)
You definetly worth a praise.. Specially the feeling conveyed by the lines-'and never wish to be seen' indicating her selfless gestures, Nice
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Nice dedication! ! Mother and daughter! Musing along with your poetry. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.