My Heart Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
My Heart
“I was amused to read few lines”
I always presented it with sublime
Simple touch of grief and pain was always there
I cried many times after reading it here
Why heart was responding so much?
Why was it giving healing touch/
Where from all those words coming?
I always felt part of it with home coming
One thing was emerging surely
The heart was responding readily
It was human feeling with pain
Earth was made wet with arrival of rain
Yes, it was this sensible part
That formed real engine to depart
From happiness to that of tragedy
And back to original mood steadily
No one is aware of its exact nature
Fiber metal or simple flash to assure
It is human centre with lot more thoughts
Openly coming out in favor or against
“Face it bravely and respond”
Always listen to appeal and correspond
Never disobey the sincere call
Else you may always face obstacle or wall
Victoria Loberiza Grana Padillo likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1
Good Ansilla B5 minutes ago I like the rhythm of it and especially liked the fourth stanza. Thanks for sharing!
Stephen ePrivate2 hours ago This poems has lines that are poorly constructed, even for a poem. I am not sure what you were trying to achieve, but you seem to have been trying to use poetic license on the sentence structure, before you had learnt how to construct more simple poems. You must walk before you run. Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh Mehta2 hours ago jump to no conclusion that shall add only confusion understand the real heart you may certainly witness the art
Very good Tracy Bollinger2 hours ago Responding from the heart is superior to responding from the intellect is the the message I got from this. This was very spiritual to me. Comment 0 ... Dean Berger2 hours ago ... Comment +1 Tried, but failed
Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh! about an hour ago · Unlike · 1
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Good Ansilla B2 hours ago I like the rhythm of it and especially liked the fourth stanza. Thanks for sharing! Comment 0
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“I was amused to read few lines” I always presented it with sublime