My Interospection Poem by vittal vandavasu

My Interospection



I am powered by hatred's offering
Motivated by woe
My experience is suffering
And that is so

I am compelled by hate
To do the things I do
I withhold my fate
What is it to you?

You call me a sinner
But have you known my side?
I had a poisoned dinner
My talent's lament is what i ride

I believe joy is fooling my self
Today i know the truth i never wanted to know
Selfishness lay behind every cloth in the shelf
It is why I let go their say and run my go

Wish i could write like William Wordsworth
Wish I could sing like the songbird
Wish they knew the words hurt
And I wish I could be truly heard

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Zainab Amjad 19 August 2009

You express it so simply.

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Ency Bearis 11 August 2009

With this poem you did express your inner thoughts and nicely presented, the emotion is well defined and your wish is heard and observed....and the observation I made is your title..I can't comprehend with ' interospection ' maybe you mean -Introspection - = a self - contemplation of your inner thoughts.....otherwise this poem well represented and written well...

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Bhaswat Chakraborty 08 August 2009

My young friend, I wish I could be so direct and powerful as you are in all my expressions. 'Wish i could write like William Wordsworth Wish I could sing like the songbird Wish they knew the words hurt And I wish I could be truly heard' ..........................WOW.....................

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