Saturday, August 27, 2022

My King Among Men Comments

Rating: 5.0

You walk somewhere in the shadows,
You're with me in dreams at night,
You float in the air like a leaf on a breeze,
I'm holding your memory tight.
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Jayne Louise Davies
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Timber Koleden 25 August 2025

What a beautifully expressed, powerful tribute to your father! I love my father so much and cannot imagine losing him! Thank you for sharing this tribute to a true king amongst men!

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Richard Wlodarski 28 August 2022

An incredibly loving tribute to a father that you had very deeply loved.

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Michael Cochrane 28 August 2022

Very beautiful

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Jayne Louise Davies 28 August 2022

Thank you so much Michael. Much appreciated x

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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 August 2022

This oh so beautiful poem makes me very sad, since my dearest Dad died at such a very young age and he was so very talented, but your poem is an amazing Beauty, Jayne! 5 Stars TOP Score

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Jayne Louise Davies 28 August 2022

So glad you liked it Sylvia x Thank you for your kind comments x

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Terry Searcy 27 August 2022

Beautifully written

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Jayne Louise Davies 28 August 2022

Thank you Terry. I appreciate your comment.

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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