My Less Sober State Poem by Matthew Holloway
My Less Sober State
My less sober state
Drowns all that's good
Bright and beautiful
Leaving little to be loved
My less sober state
Questions a strangers face
In reflection and deeds
For though it was me
I was not him
My less sober state
A dubious accountant
To a live only half lived
Any audit would recommend
A time to change
This is excellent my friend. I would revise the line" to a live half lived" I think that is what you meant was tto a life half lived. This is transparent poem that touches the topic of alcoholism and the outlook on life. A need for change cries out in the poem! A 10!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/6/2024 12:53:12 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Well written poem, to know the change has to come from within is half way to the needed change. A 10!