My Life And My Situation Poem by MOHAMMAD SKATI

My Life And My Situation

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I am broke... I suffer from many things... I complain from myself... I am almost out of money... I am alone... I am alive in death... I am almost dead in life... I am far from that rock of suicide... I pray alone for those who suffer greatly... I write poems about my whole life... My whole situation is crabby... I am caged... My hands are tied and I am helpless... My whole life depicts my whole situation anytime... I suffer... It hurts me on all levels... I am no more... I am a body without a soul... I am unknown... ______________________________________________________________________

Saturday, September 27, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: loss
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tajudeen Shah 27 September 2014

dear poet, read your verses. please see if you can add some beauty to these expressions by duly adding some images, similes, metaphorical additions and so on.. (purely my humble suggestion) the theme you have written is really sensible, and needs much attention. God bless. let me find some time to read you more. take care? . hope you doing fine. how is situation in Syria now. How is family? rgds. taj shah

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