To Be Near You Poem by Jayne Louise Davies

To Be Near You

Rating: 5.0

Dependant on dreams,
Just to get through,
Hoping each night,
I get to see you.

Eyes closing tight,
Searching for you,
Then there you appear,
Wandering through.

The green summer grass,
In fields of flowers,
I hope that this dream,
Can go on for hours.

From the moment I see you,
I don't want you to go,
I walk right beside you,
Just like before.

I tell you I love you,
And then shed a tear,
How wonderful dreams are,
To just have you near.

Jayne Louise Davies

Dr Dillip K Swain 22 April 2023

I must congratulate you dear poetess! Your wonderful poetry deserves to be praised!

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Jayne Louise Davies 22 April 2023

Many thanks Dillip : ) much appreciated x

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Brooke Renwick 22 April 2023

This poem is an inspiration having a new angle within the wording.

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Jayne Louise Davies 22 April 2023

Thank you Brooke : ) much appreciated x

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Lovely Enchantress 06 May 2024

This poem touched my soul.

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Sandra Feldman 22 April 2023

Beautiful poem, well deserved honor as Poem of the Day. Sincere congratulations, dear Jayne.

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Jayne Louise Davies 23 April 2023

Thank you Sandra : ) x

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Jayne Louise Davies 22 April 2023

Many thanks to you all for your kind comments : ) I appreciate them all immensely xx

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Kevin Hulme 22 April 2023

I also have dreams of people I miss. Always nice. Lovely poem.

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Kim Barney 22 April 2023

Jayne, this is very well done. Sincere congrats for poem of the day!

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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