My Light Poem by Mark louie Cañete

My Light

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The rain falls, see the ground
I'm wet and feeling cold unbound
Hopeless, crying a sound untold
Crazy feeling, no one to hold

And as the tears fall together with the rain
Happy no one see a tear I drain
I want to keep this and still pretending
Rather seeing someone is also hurting

Even though the pain wont stop
the bond of stillness I wont drop
I will send this sadness to you my God
Help me. hold me I'm on the dark

Longing for someone I can count
As I aim in the pit of a broken pot
Don't let the door close, as it tear as a part
Your the only one at my side as my light

Wednesday, November 3, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: inspirational
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gillena Cox 26 January 2012

to send those tears to God; is to seek good counsel and comfort; well dne

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Gillena Cox 19 November 2010

a beautiful soulful poem, full of depth, honesty and skill

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Redd Juceekittee 10 November 2010

Let God's love be your pillow for rest and Her/His love also be your shield and armor throughout trying times and uncertainties

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