My Lord Poem by Prabir Gayen

My Lord

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My Lord

O My master!
The Lord of the world,
You live as absolute Joy
in my heart,
and my mind is full
of your thoughts,
Your love in my heart
is like a veil,
like a divine covering.

Pain is common and seems
eternal in this room,
You reign and dance like
absolute nothingness
when I feel my mind is absent.

O my master! My mind's only hope,
The great dance of emotion,
And my pain with no verbage,
the unbearable tremor in every
cell of my being,
I live as if I am nothing.

You are present in my day,
dream and delirium,
and my pain is poignant
upon my awakening.

With so much pain for the Love
Uncontrolled and indulgent,
I live as a shadow self
with your Light inherent,
My Being is the shadow
of your Love and my self is
Nothing and inclined to go
beyond border.

@prabir Gayen / 6April,10: 12 AM/2020.

My Lord
Monday, April 6, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 06 April 2020

My Lord O My master! The Lord of the world, You live as absolute Joy in my heart, and my mind is full of your thoughts, Your love in my heart is like a veil, like a divine covering.......................mesmerizing poem, a thought provoking one. Full of excellence!

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Prabir Gayen 06 April 2020

You are a great poet and a great critic too... Your analysis is superb...a full justice of a poem.. A great PhD you are....

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Sylvia Frances Chan 06 April 2020

Pain is common and seems eternal in this room, You reign and dance like absolute nothingness when I feel my mind is absent........................Imaginably said and told. Wonderful poem! Marvelously worded.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 06 April 2020

O my master! My mind's only hope, The great dance of emotion, And my pain with no verbage, the unbearable tremor in every cell of my being, I live as if I am nothing..........................a loyal servant of the master, wonderful! Humble words, amazing!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 06 April 2020

O LORD OF WORDS PLEASE PG READ MY VERSE MARRIED TO SOLITUDE AND CONVERSE MAY UR LORD BLESS YOU FIRST

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Bernard F. Asuncion 06 April 2020

An inspirational write. Excellently scribed......10++++

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Sylvia Frances Chan 06 April 2020

The photographs you added are most beautiful and so cutest! They are the superfillers of your great heart, dear poet! God's Blessings in abundance for you and your beloved family.Amen.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 06 April 2020

with your Light inherent my being is the shadow of your Love and my self is Nothing..........this is truly loveliest said and told, but remains humble nothing, and your Light is inherent....your being is the shadow...... captivating and crystal clear, a prolific poignant poem, poet! I like your allegory! Marvelously worded. A 10+++

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Sylvia Frances Chan 06 April 2020

You are present in my day, dream and delirium, and my pain is poignant upon my awakening...................All stanzas so loveliest said, dream and delirium, aptly said and worded. Very emotively created.Words are in war here, but for the the super best result!

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