Friday, November 6, 2015

My Lost Lover Comments

Rating: 4.8

He calls me beautiful as he plays with my hair.
He whispers in my ears he loves me.
Maybe that's why I miss him.
Maybe that's why my body aches for him.
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Hannah Torres
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Howard Savage 09 January 2016

Beautiful poem of love, I hope love is reborn

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Chinedu Dike 28 November 2015

Love - a spiritual experience and voyage of bliss is also whimsical and temperamental. It appears unannounced and may leave without warning, if it's not carefully nurtured at all-time to maintain its bliss. A well articulated love poem insightfully penned from the heart. A lovely piece indeed. Thanks for sharing Hannah. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Fabrizio Frosini 07 November 2015

mm.. have to say that the wise note below (= Kelly's comment) is my own, too.. ;) Cheers

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Kelly Kurt 07 November 2015

~*It is my experience that such endings are for the best. If someone walks out on you, they did not care enough in the first place or had a good reason. I hope you move on and find peace.

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Souren Mondal 07 November 2015

A very emotional poem that expresses the feelings of lost lost in a very proper way... Thank you for sharing Hannah...

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Chuy Amante 06 November 2015

the chemical of love is fun warms you up like the sun burning burning burning make sure the next guy gives good foot rubs they are more sincere

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Hannah Torres 06 November 2015

It is and I'll make sure that's a requirement for my next guy.

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