My Loud Solitude Poem by Cheryl Tutaan

My Loud Solitude

Rating: 4.4


Why there are some people who could hear you a thousand words and still not understand you? ...
A big question that blows my mind.
How can you think without thinking?
Feeling without feeling,
Can you just imagine that?
A happy heart, intertwined with your sad soul.
A weird feel...
Loving of being alone sometimes,
But couldn't embrace the solitude;
I love my music so loud,
That I can't barely hear my thoughts;
I lied, I couldn't stop myself clicking the pad.
Being alone on a space boot,
It's not the temporary paralysis;
It's more on the numbness of the heart,
You almost can't feel the blood pumping the vessels.
It could stuck somewhere else out of your body.
That strange feeling, spaced-out, maybe even the mania, does understand...
Almost drowned with the nightmares
with your demons,
You can't even wake up;
They know how to swim...
They're not even sure how you will escape;
They could follow you from behind...
Losing myself on a cold, damp night,
I'm tired, please leave me alone...
I want to find my serene solitude...

SweetLyrehc©
052317

My Loud Solitude
Monday, May 22, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: feeling,lost,sadness,solitude
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 23 May 2017

Very creative poetic atmosphere is created here. Thanks

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Cheryl Tutaan 23 May 2017

I do appreciate your valuable comment and vote, Jazib...thank you...

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Bernard F. Asuncion 22 May 2017

Such an interesting poem written in the silence of the night... a big 10 for you++++

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Cheryl Tutaan 23 May 2017

Yeah...it calms my senses...Thank you so much for the support... :)

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Unwritten Soul 31 May 2017

Cheryl, i do have same feeling like this too....you know many out there also have same feeling... its humanely feeling hahahahahaha....love the words, i can feel it as it was mine :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 October 2019

A cold damp night! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 09 October 2019

This is well crafted and well conveyed.....

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Bernard F. Asuncion 08 October 2019

I can hear the loud solitude.....

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Bernard F. Asuncion 07 October 2019

This wonderful piece brings insight....

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Bernard F. Asuncion 06 October 2019

The message is quite clear and loud....

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