My Love Poem by Rakhi Jayashankar

My Love

Rating: 4.8


I love him beyond words
I talk about him beyond thought
I think of him beyond the world
I need him beyond the life

Words are nothing when i express how much i feel for him
In the beginning of the horizon
In the end of eternity
I see only one person
Its him him only
Life love and lust
All my feelings are only for him

I procured him against destiny
Gods bowed down before our love
Destiny changed before our soul

In every footsteps
In every heart beats
In every breath
In every words
I express only one thing
I love him I love him I love him

For all those trod me for my love
For all those frowned at my love
For all those grimaces of time
I must say one thing
Beyond the time,
Beyond life
Beyond death
Beyond birth
He is mine

Waiting for years
To tie a knot
To come out triumphantly
To walk through the streets holding hand in hand
Searching for my fingers
To feel the touch of love

I am here undefeated unaffected
Waiting for that day................

Sunday, February 8, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and pain
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This story was written 12years back when I was 16!
Today MY LOVE is mine
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 10 February 2015

A beautiful love poem, well articulated and penned with intensity to capture the conviction of the poet. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Lovely poem. Of love. Great emotional writing

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 19 February 2015

I was about to wish you best of luck when I found the footnote. Congratulations - you got him. Passionate write.

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 19 February 2015

I was about to wish you best of luck when I found the footnote. Congratulations - you got him. Passionate write

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Alexandra Petrico-zabelina 14 February 2015

The poem describes something like i've experienced myself and fortunately am still feeling it. I guess it's the highest praise when you hear that the feelings you aimed to express through your poetry have been found familiar or already felt or dreamt of by a reader. Very touching...)

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Paul Sebastian 14 February 2015

A love soaked passionate poem of a lover. Beautifully written.

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