My Love For Peaches Poem by me poet yeps poet

My Love For Peaches

Rating: 5.0


VERY nice typing of a poem
showing deep
a bad portion of a mango sodden

I once went to Kashmir
and to an orchard
saw no mangoes
no oranges
but the guy who owned it said
pick up all apples
the wind had on the ground laid
and he was happy
all were taken away
by men who hadn't eaten one

I asked him
have you any oranges
he said smilingly
peaches only peaches
queues look there
he showed me so many girls
picking peaches
one none better than them

OM A N

Monday, February 18, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: peace,beautiful,boy,fruits,garden,girls
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Notes
I love fruits
peaches and oranges
AND LIVE TOO
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 20 February 2019

AGAIN USER RATING 5 ***** THANS ALL

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Aniruddha Pathak 18 February 2019

so many girls picking peaches one none better than them.. Yes of course. Good word picture.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 18 February 2019

your kindness AP Ji thanks for reading me grateful

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Thomas Kane 18 February 2019

Paints a splendid picture my friend good write!

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opoet me poet 18 February 2019

beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder and we all know who do discern have beautifuller eyes like yours and mine lovely gals shy away smile and often wink look nto my eyes so they seem to say yeah come over we shall play no lies and not as in lay but within eyes smies give we may

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