My Love For You Poem by Amanda Riddle

My Love For You

Rating: 4.0


I liked you the first time i saw you.
I liked you more the first time we hugged.
I fell in love the frst time we kissed.
My heart melted when you said 'I love you.'
I almost died when you asked me to marry you.
Now I stand here watching them lay you in the ground.
I dont cry and the people are staring. I look at them with a smile and say 'I do not weep for he knows that i loved him so, I do not weep for I know I will see him again.'
For when I see you again I know that....
I will like you when i see you.
I will like you even more when we hug.
I will fall in love when we kiss.
And you will make my heart melt when you say 'I Love You and I Have Missed You So Much.'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
William Jackson 13 March 2006

Truly moving poem. I am so sorry for your loss.

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Rhonda Riddle 13 March 2006

As your mother I am obligated to say this is a wonderful poem and I'm very proud of you. But as an outsider looking in and reading this poem, I am obligated to myself to give you my heartfelt opinion. I find this poem to be truly remarkable. Very well written and one I know comes from deep within your heart. This poem will be read by people who will touch their hearts afterwards and sign a feeling of contentment. Well done Ms. Riddle. :)

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Mary Nagy 12 March 2006

I agree with you........we don't have to cry, they know and that's all that matters. This was very powerful Amanda. Great poem. Sincerely, Mary

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Charles M Moore 12 March 2006

Very touching and vivid poem Amanda, shows great feeling.

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Timmy Tubbs 12 March 2006

very deep, very powerful, very sad. Great poem. I'm sorry for your loss. You write so well.

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