My Love Lost Poem by Silent Speaker

My Love Lost

Rating: 2.3


Love Lost
Depression found
Happiness gone
joy bound

My emotions
they stay in
nothing out
my trust thin

Cut my answer
bad as it is
some know
my secret this

Love a myth
thats what I feel
felt love once
yet fake not real

Depressed I am
now I admit
Love has hurt
its pointless s*%t

yet love I miss
I want it bad
savor I wish
the love I had

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Autumn Jones 10 July 2009

You did a very good job. It's easy to identify with and understandable despite the short lines. Very, very good.

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Nangula Immanuel 22 April 2009

i love the way you wrote this one. The incomplete sentences make it interesting! ! Another really good poem erika! WELL DONE! ! !

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Rayjean Carter 09 April 2009

good job writing this poem. i like the way u wrote it. i feel ur sadness....: (

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