Silent Speaker

Rookie (1994 / Ohio)

My Love Lost - Poem by Silent Speaker

Love Lost
Depression found
Happiness gone
joy bound

My emotions
they stay in
nothing out
my trust thin

Cut my answer
bad as it is
some know
my secret this

Love a myth
thats what I feel
felt love once
yet fake not real

Depressed I am
now I admit
Love has hurt
its pointless s*%t

yet love I miss
I want it bad
savor I wish
the love I had

Comments about My Love Lost by Silent Speaker

  • (7/10/2009 11:54:00 AM)

    You did a very good job. It's easy to identify with and understandable despite the short lines. Very, very good. (Report)Reply

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  • (4/22/2009 5:42:00 PM)

    i love the way you wrote this one. The incomplete sentences make it interesting! ! Another really good poem erika! WELL DONE! ! ! (Report)Reply

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  • (4/9/2009 6:07:00 PM)

    good job writing this poem. i like the way u wrote it. i feel ur sadness....: ( (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 9, 2009

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