(*complete Me* Poem by Silent Speaker

(*complete Me*

Rating: 2.9


Is it true
that away I'm pusing you
I'm honestly saying
I'm not trying to

You just don't understand
That everyone has left me
and while trying to keep you close
away I've been pushing

I'm sorry
for not doing whats right
but I don't know what the right thing is
so please lets stop this fight

I want to make this work
to never let you go
I'll stop hiding my emotions
The complete me I'll show

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
? ? ? ? 17 August 2009

this poem really amazing sweet and all great talent near perfection keep it up

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Sarwar Chowdhury 15 August 2009

Fine thought out! Clearly said facts. 10+

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Afzal Shauq 13 August 2009

want to make this work to never let you go I'll stop hiding my emotions The complete me I'll show perfect... its really a good poem as your poetry is.. I liked the idea and agree with..because there is only wya to be completed when the missing second half is suddenly happen to be and make you perfect... love the idea, wich is thoughful and great written in poetic and melodic way..10/10

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Cory Davis 12 August 2009

This sounds familiar. This poem really shows a struggle. Thanks for writing something so meaningful

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