Thursday, March 5, 2015

My Loving Ernie, Comments

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A wretched boat on the chaotic ocean searched the shore
“Life is better than dream; save it first then, clean the gore, ”
Having glimpse of sand, steered boat with the greatest joy,
From the death trap to dream world; seen a wounded boy
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Susan Williams 28 October 2020

He whispered in my ear, ” Soon I will start my journey “ Go, be a dream, blessing be with you; my loving Ernie, - - - - - - - -lines that put readers in tears

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 March 2015

Soon i will start my journey. Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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