Aftab Alam

Gold Star - 39,838 Points (15 th April 1967 / RANCHI,)

My Loving Ernie, - Poem by Aftab Alam

A wretched boat on the chaotic ocean searched the shore
“Life is better than dream; save it first then, clean the gore, ”
Having glimpse of sand, steered boat with the greatest joy,
From the death trap to dream world; seen a wounded boy

He kissed the shore and then took, handful sand in his fist
And ran shouting; I won, I’m alive, life is the best holy feast
Those struggled for the life can define life in dreamy way,
With heavy lids, I hugged him with no words; I couldn't say

He whispered in my ear, ” Soon I will start my journey “
Go, be a dream, blessing be with you; my loving Ernie,

Topic(s) of this poem: life


Comments about My Loving Ernie, by Aftab Alam

  • Edward Kofi Louis (3/6/2015 8:01:00 AM)


    Soon i will start my journey. Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

    E.K.L.
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 5, 2015



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