My Loving One... Poem by M Sagnik Das

My Loving One...

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There's so much about you,
That makes me feel refreshed.
It's not the glint of fire in your hair,
Or the fire in your heart,
Or even the simmering warmth of-
Your homemade tea,
Or homemade verses.
It's the general sensation of knowing
Someone like you exists-
A creature of compassion,
A creature beyond the realms of flesh.
You ignite me and inspire me,
You drive me further,
And so in writing this,
I acknowledge the fact that-
This small composition lacks
In displaying your true aura-
Your vibe, energy- semblance,
I just wanted to-
Press into your perception,
Just how radiant-
And how vital-
You are to-
This entity of an ecosystem,
This ever-changing atmosphere,
The rotation of winds-
This world, this life,

Wednesday, May 17, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: descriptive
Raj Aditya 17 May 2017

Awesome poem bhai...I love it! !

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Roman R 17 May 2017

Awesome descriptive poem...i love it....

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Roman R 17 May 2017

Awesome poem....Lovely description...

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Roman R 17 May 2017

Awesome poem...Lovely...You can write more of such poemsss

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Pratham Goyal 13 June 2017

i wish some fine day she loves u back... all the very best

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Dr Antony Theodore 08 June 2017

beautiful love and very descriptive in writing this world, this life.. Myself. thank you for sharing. tony

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 May 2017

Semblance! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Mohit Gupta 26 May 2017

wow what a poem with lots of meaning...ummm luv it

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Moh Shaan 17 May 2017

Awesome bai

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M Sagnik Das 18 May 2017

thankx a lott

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M Sagnik Das

M Sagnik Das

Dhanbad, Jharkhand
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