My Mind Poem by Mary Taylor

My Mind

Rating: 5.0


my mind
without substance
ransacks
inner universe
building taste
and forms
save soul.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Thufail Ahmed 15 October 2007

You have done it again.........Lovely one.

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Broken Peaces 28 November 2007

Content good for a short poem voted Chris

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O Anna Niemus 10 June 2008

please keep writing your thought provoking gems

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~ Jon London ~ 30 April 2008

What a remarkable poem...truly wonderful, Thanks for sharing cheers Jon

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 18 March 2008

this is a mind boggler.........what a writes...........

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Chelsea Brink 02 January 2008

way to capture several philosophical views in such a short poem!

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William Jackson 01 January 2008

The mind is a rather ethereal thing. Where does it reside exactly? Does it reside completely in the bioelectrical sponge called the brain? I like your thought of the 'mind without substance ransacking the inner universe, building taste and forms' for that is what an active mind does. It tears down existing structures into composite parts and recatagorizes them as it forms new structures. And you are right that all in all you throughout the process one is building soul and taste. Thank you for a thought provoking write!

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