My Moon Poem by Monique Leo

My Moon

Rating: 5.0


Our souls, yet to have encountered, but I know you see it

I often wonder what goes through your mind on your most sleepless nights

To all the gifts in this world, the greatest are the stars tonight, that draw our future

Apart, at this night spent with melancholy. You are my comfort

My melancholy. You feel it, you see it



As I sit below the dark skyline, illuminated - I wear the moonlight like a silk vail

My mind writing these words I feel inside me. I know you feel it, please feel it

Let my pain be your guide, my tears be your trail, find me

I'm begging, hopeless and worn. My heart torn and thrown beside this road

Emptiness fills my eyes like constellations in the sky, my soul lost in each mystery dot

Silence, not a sound but the trees. A cureless disaster to embark

I need not. Like I need you. My peace, my destiny




Stargazzing, I look up and mediate to my mysterious fate

There has to be a time, perhaps an experience alike. Where you lay and ponder

I, your mystery. I know you felt this. My promise, your answer, our unborn

We will end up together, looking up at what was once written by the stars this night

In your arms I could die, I crave you like no other, My everything, my flame

Who needs the moon, when I have you.

My moon

Wednesday, February 27, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love,moon,soul mate
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Heartbroken, waiting on future love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 01 March 2019

Write comment. A good start, Monique. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Chinedu Dike 28 February 2019

Well articulated and nicely brought forth with clarity of thought and mind. Very heartfelt. Thanks for sharing Monique.

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Monique Leo 01 March 2019

Thank you so much for your comment. It came to me at 4am, I had to write it. A lot of emotions at the time

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Kim Barney 27 February 2019

You have a lot of promise. This poem is full of emotion. A few minor spelling and grammar errors, but very good nevertheless. Welcome to Poem Hunter!

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Monique Leo 01 March 2019

Thank you so much, that means alot. I really wrote it out of a spur of the moment type of thing. I was deep in emotion.

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Iftekhar Ifti 27 February 2019

It’s looked you are new here, but I can assure you go miles with your writing.

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Monique Leo 01 March 2019

That you so much for that comment. One of the kindest things I have heard in awhile. -Monique

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