My Muse! ! Poem by Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

My Muse! !

Rating: 5.0


Behind me there is a phantom,
munching some juicy sewing gum,
never noticed it when I was young.
Never bothered it when I was bold,

Behind me there is a phantom,
Armored with feathers of pins,
not my friend, but it says I am its,
pain can be coated: muse not,

when the feathers do the wonders,
the needles do the blunders,
the trouser pockets have no zipper,
the happiness is the silencer,

Thursday, December 10, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: thought
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
to what ever that happens that can not be explained by anyone..
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ratnakar Mandlik 10 December 2015

Short and sweet soliloquy giving vent to thoughts.Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 December 2015

Feathers of life do wonder in this interesting expression. Fantastically you have expressed entire thought in this poem. Wisely penned.10

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