My Night Poem by Smack Thompson

My Night

Rating: 5.0


A friend let me crash at their place tonight

so I take a peak at their laptop and play around on the internet
tonight
no back against a hard cold dumpster for me tonight
tonight
I get to sleep next

to

a

space

heater
one of those dangerous wall
ones that might set you on fire
but better than them cold hard dumpsters the gutter punk kids
like me live around
(Am I still a punk kid at 37? Damn.)

I like sleeping indoors

used to have my own place with
a girlfriend
but she got tired of me forgetting to do the dishes
and she'd find those little maggot shells everywhere

Man this friend is a cool kat
and she's got all sorts of nudie pictures of herself

in
her
My Pictures
folder she said

'I don't mind you looking at'

I guess she's an exhibitionist or something

Life is good and warm tonight
and I guess that's good enough right?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Charles Darkly 18 January 2012

Take care Smack. Yours is a rare soul and you are here for a reason. Great write.

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Jonny Brackney 17 January 2012

a powerful poem........

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John Carse 14 January 2012

Hi Jack - been browsing through the new poems, not findIng amything good when your words caught my eye and immediately drew me into your world - vived, real, concise: everything a good poem should be. Being technologically challenged I'm new to poetry websites - thank you for making my first visit so memorable.

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G.r. Melvin 14 January 2012

much fun, you colorful character, you honestly enjoyed yr work, keep on man

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