My Pathos Poem by seema alvi

My Pathos



Living in the deserty woods
how hollow I feel
The eidetic memories
of the days gone by
Reflashes across
the mind
Rendering me lonely
to the core
The serene yet quite atmosphere
The songs of nightingale
and the lonely musings of solitary chrysanthemum
A caged bird
Trying hard for freedom
the roaring wave
trying hard to touch the yearning shore
But alas|
Losing strength
In the midst
All being witness of my shattered existence.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indranil Bhaduri 20 July 2013

Very nicely done. Keep on writing.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 22 December 2012

I love nightingales in a poem too. Admire yor poem even if it manifests a pensive mood, atleast its poetic. :)

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Kazi Ahmed 29 September 2011

First Poem but Good poem. Lot of imagination and rhythm. thanks. read my poem.

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Javaid Anwar 29 June 2011

one can feel the pain of the poet wile reading it. nice poem.

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