Wednesday, November 16, 2005

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Living in the deserty woods
how hollow I feel
The eidetic memories
of the days gone by
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seema alvi
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Indranil Bhaduri 20 July 2013

Very nicely done. Keep on writing.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 22 December 2012

I love nightingales in a poem too. Admire yor poem even if it manifests a pensive mood, atleast its poetic. :)

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Kazi Ahmed 29 September 2011

First Poem but Good poem. Lot of imagination and rhythm. thanks. read my poem.

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Javaid Anwar 29 June 2011

one can feel the pain of the poet wile reading it. nice poem.

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