My Poems Is Not Poetry Poem by Mary Wismer

My Poems Is Not Poetry

Rating: 4.8


My Poems are not Poetry
Poetry rhythm is essential part
Communicative act of rhythms
Where words created music
An effect on the reader’s and listener
Words beginning with the same letter
And achieve a poetically effect.

My Poems has no rhythms
For the first time I don’t know
What to say and how to show.
Many words is not my style
Let me say, I like your smile
I don’t think I should like you,
Unfortunately I do.

I'm not sure now how to write
I lost my idea how, where words
Are used in away similar
Creating Music, where you find
Languages of rhymes

I write Prose but not Poetry
Using a regular rhythm
Where vast majority
Of languages spoken and written.

I try to be a barn, the muses were believed and inspire
I try to hard without success,
you already know, I guess.
Anyhow, it doesn’t matter
Usually I do not write
Things like this, I never tried,
for the first time I don’t know
what these lines should say or show.

Allegory, metaphor equated
Meaning lie outside the narrative
Acrostic phase when read together
Alliteration words same letter for poetical effect
Satire is a form of humour
Limerick is a short humorous poem.
And Honestly, I don’t regret
Things I did and words I said.

7. January 2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chris Mendros 09 January 2008

well, for not poetry, it is a very interesting poem.

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Thad Wilk 07 January 2008

Mary i always enjoy reading your poems! Keep em coming gal! ! *10*! ! Friend Thad

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CU2urDream Lost 07 January 2008

Mary, If someone should tells you that your english are not good enough, should be me...people judges others without looking unto their own mirror, he might right used old english or traditional...but nothing are inside what he is writing thats nothing at all...doesn't mean you write a simple english your english are bad...he his self down write poetry as he though he are..so Mary follow your heart do not listen to other poet dont compare your self to them for they are not you...let them spoke what they want to spake they are not good them selves at all....your are sim'ple but readers are able to understand your work than those they think they are perfect so continue...dont give up..you are good cause you have it from your heart thats make you a better poet..

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 06 January 2008

YOUR WORDS COME FROM YOUR HEART, THEY ARE PURE POEMS

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Fred Babbin 06 January 2008

This is better than most of the garbage you see here. You know a lot about what youshould do. Too bad your English isn't better.

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