My Poetic 'if' Poem by Anne Yun
My Poetic 'if'
If i could fly to a rainbow
I would shine at the very second
That you might happen to look up at the sky
If i could fold my youth to a wrinkle
I would appear at every occasion
That you forget to smile upon your life
If i could love without tremble
I would caress your wrinkle
And sing to your life till you smile again, like rainbow
As a perception the poem here is a very very good one.Do correct its inappropriate english here and there.
Poetic if i like it If i could fold my youth to a wrinkle I must appear at every occasion That you forget to smile upon your life Thanks for sharing.
If i could give my life to a rainbow I must shine at the very second That you happen to look up at the sky= If I could fly to a rainbow//I would make it shine at....nd//you might happen look...//
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/20/2024 5:35:55 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Delightful to read. The connection between rainbow, wrinkle, and smile is a very strong visual. Rainbows and especially wrinkles are creative additions to the anthology of love imagery. I enjoyed reading this and thinking about the pictures unfolding in my mind. Thank you.