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My Poor Forbiden Soul

My soul was once yours, you owned me.
But when you looked at me and said your goodbye's,
You destroyed it and me.
My soul is forbiden in your territory,
Never allowed to come by.

Is it better i stay away? Yes.
Have i listened? No.
I seem to come back each time you pushed me away.
Why wont you accept me? You love someone else.
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Justice Bernard Brown 07 January 2012
this is very good.. :)
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Esther Obeng 29 December 2011
great poem Turner, keep it up
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Samantha Turner 29 December 2011
^^, thank chuz! It really means alot knowing chu guys like dem. [3 Thanks for everything.
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Jessica Workman 28 December 2011
Very great poem! I love it.
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Tempest Juliet 28 December 2011
There's a lot of potential in your writing. I see strong, clear emotion. I think you're destined to be a great poet. :) That said, you've got a ways to go. Having proper spelling sends your message across clearer, and allows people to see you more as a poet and less as a little girl.
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