Samantha Rose Turner

Rookie - 0 Points (April 7th 1999 (13yrs) / New Castle, PA)

My Poor Forbiden Soul - Poem by Samantha Rose Turner

My soul was once yours, you owned me.
But when you looked at me and said your goodbye's,
You destroyed it and me.
My soul is forbiden in your territory,
Never allowed to come by.

Is it better i stay away? Yes.
Have i listened? No.
I seem to come back each time you pushed me away.
Why wont you accept me? You love someone else.

Let me trespass on your land,
Listen to my voice, look deep into my eyes
Ignore what you see on the outside, and think of my soul.
You see what you've done to it?
Now look at my heart. You broke it.

I trusted you with everything i've got.
Now i would trade it all just to have you back.
I wish i could tell you this My Love.
But even if i did, i'll always be forbidden through your eyes.

-Samantha
Age: 12
12-28-11
5: 41pm


Comments about My Poor Forbiden Soul by Samantha Rose Turner

  • (1/7/2012 11:46:00 PM)


    this is very good.. :) (Report) Reply

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  • (12/29/2011 10:38:00 AM)


    great poem Turner,
    keep it up
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  • (12/29/2011 9:05:00 AM)


    ^^, thank chuz! It really means alot knowing chu guys like dem. [3 Thanks for everything. (Report) Reply

  • (12/28/2011 10:08:00 PM)


    Very great poem! I love it. (Report) Reply

  • (12/28/2011 5:32:00 PM)


    There's a lot of potential in your writing. I see strong, clear emotion. I think you're destined to be a great poet. :)
    That said, you've got a ways to go. Having proper spelling sends your message across clearer, and allows people to see you more as a poet and less as a little girl.
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 28, 2011



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