My Poor Husbands! Comments
you betrayed our love once or twice but
don't worry i'm not so loyal too! ! !
i betray you when i study for a difficult exam or before i sleep, in my dreams! !
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Everyone has rights to dream, it is not betrayal, you speak by all's tongue. Beautiful writing.
An interesting poem....A bitter truth wrapped in dreams and poetic fantacy, which many men do'nt understand......10/10.
Negar/P.I....This piece is off-the-charts innovative, and most entertaining. Your left-halve neuro dominance was in full throttle, for sure...when you inked this pen-gem! FjR
thoughts weird...but fascinatingly original...honesty of the youth...and honesty of the inner mind...in open conflict good imaginative write, Negar...Why not, a ten?
Very nice, beautiful idea indeed. Lovely write with a mix of humour and a tinge of bitterness. And the twist in the end is superb.......
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3/14/2026 4:52:47 PM # 1.0.0
great negar i'm sure that its only a dream.