Guess Who


My Reply To Your Message....≪3 - Poem by Guess Who

Staring your message at my computer screen,
For a moment, I felt something different in the air,
I could not help myself but to stare.
Thinking of our first meet near to arrive,
My heart felt like singing and so alive.
It seems like a dream that soon we will be together,
Talking, laughing, touching and knowing each other.
In you I see a good friend with a listening ear,
Understanding me, even though you're always apart, never been so near.
I often wonder, just to see a stranger's smile,
What made me ready to visit a mile?
In millions I felt we are one of a kind,
The day our chat begun, you always remain in my mind.
A perfect you and me, that's rarely found,
Our imaginations make us feel like flying together above the ground.
Flying in the sunny sky, where no pain, no cries.
Don't know why it is happening like this,
The whole day I go on, miss you and miss
I hadn't imagined in the start,
I am going to like you so much with my heart.
I imagine the moment when I'll hold your hand in my own,
Would that be the loveliest moment my soul has known?
I know in our first meet, you are going to smile at me with your warm caring face,
And suddenly I am gonna feel heaven at that place.
When I'll be with you there's nothing to say,
Except I promise my lifetime friendship to you for each and every day.
Well, tomorrow is going to be ‘Our Good Friday',


The story of us is still uncompleted not as you said ' A Book which is filled to the end'
The poem is dedicated to my lovely, whom I miss each and every moment of the day.


Comments about My Reply To Your Message....≪3 by Guess Who

  • Sharad Juneja (4/20/2012 12:56:00 AM)


    very deep n intense....an advice make it bit crisp......shorten sentences (Report) Reply

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  • Unwritten Soul (4/6/2012 10:53:00 AM)


    You really sink in the deep love sea, and inspired you for such beautiful writing,
    it simply done by you like there's no hardness to do.
    Such a nice poem, a nice write! keep writing! _Unwritten Soul
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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 6, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, April 6, 2012


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