My Request Poem by Nika McGuin

My Request

Rating: 5.0


Paint me in leaf green.
Douse me with blue waters
then let me roll about in the mud.
May the sun's evening rays bake me dry.

I'll lie here waiting as the crescent moon
summons her entourage of comets and stars.
By the time the last twinkle has left the sky -
when it's all over - please,
have the wind carry me home.
That's all for now.

Thursday, January 30, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: astronomy ,freedom,humanity,metaphysical,nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 31 January 2020

A well crafted poetic expression. Simply wonderful.....10+++

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Jazib Kamalvi 30 January 2020

Write comment. Such a nice poem, Nika Mc. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Amir Marandi 30 January 2020

A beautiful poem with amazing imagery. Love it. Added to my poem list.

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Bharati Nayak 30 January 2020

I'll lie here waiting as the crescent moon summons her entourage of comets and stars. By the time the last twinkle has left the sky - when it's all over - please, have the wind carry me home. That's all for now. - - - - A wonderful poem - - - -The sky, moon and stars always facinate man.Man wants to mingle and merge with these wonders of nature.

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