My Rubber Buddy Poem by Selena Star

My Rubber Buddy

Rating: 5.0


CUT CUT CUT
is ALL i ever did
But one day it came to me
'Man this is STOOPID'

Addicted to the pain
i found a rubber band
it quickly eases my anger
From A place beneath my hand

SNAP SNAP SNAP
is ALL i ever hear
so much snapping that
the bleeding is VERY near

A blister forms on my wrist
i know it will go away
but still i use my Rubber Buddy
Each and EVERY day

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 07 June 2008

Now this is a poem. It also has thyme and some meter. That gives it a boost. Also, I credit the writer for her imagination. The fact that this is not true is far better poetically than if it were. It is a rather simple poem so it doesn't get a 9, but it is a solid 8 and recommended. GW62

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Tired of Being Exploited 02 April 2007

I must have a dirty mind. I thought this was gong to be about something completely different. But since I'm here, have you ever tried those inch wide package bands? POW like a blackjack, you remember that POP

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