David Taylor

Rookie (3rd January 1956 / LONDON, UK)

My Second Senyru - Poem by David Taylor

Tired of writing poems
I wearily wrote my second
stab at Haiku

Comments about My Second Senyru by David Taylor

  • (10/10/2007 10:32:00 AM)

    David, I've written a haiku specially for you - and damn the Western rules... (Report) Reply

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  • (10/10/2007 10:17:00 AM)

    Not quite. Your stanzas are: 7 - 8 - 4. Should be 5 -7-5. Keep trying, good message though... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 10, 2007

Poem Edited: Friday, April 15, 2011

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