My Sexy Pen Poem by Zoila T. Flores

My Sexy Pen

Rating: 5.0


Being invited to a workshop,
By a dear friend, NO refuse,
Me arriving, seeing wood chop,
Finished color, just to choose.

Very talented, men and women,
Organizing, something smart,
On designing, wooden pen,
And creating, gorgeous stuff.

Metal pieces, will be on sag,
Two wood pieces, in a bag,
A whole package, to create,
Writing pens, from scratch.

Perfect Time, to start the project,
With a wise guy, named Joel,
Stepping in, to work and correct,
What a legacy, that's on swell.

Showing talent, listen carefully,
On the process, of the shape,
One by one, getting naturally,
Swinging body, mouth as gape.

In no time, these two wood chunky,
Were displayed, on such a form,
One was skinny, other bulky,
Smooth and shiny, were no wrong.

Perfect lumber, from a dingle,
All transformed, by these men,
Wooden shaping, by the spindle,
To create my Sexy Pen.

Saturday, January 17, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: wooden
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Making something different
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 10 July 2017

This goes according to the pop culture. Try something new which could catch the fancy of people around without bothering about its long term appeal or value. Thanks.

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Michael Walker 24 May 2016

This works very effectively to a surprise ending 'my sexy pen'. Very good stanza shaping. M. Walker.

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Michael Walker 10 October 2015

I loved this poem. The rhyming quatrains are very neat. The ideas are brilliant. M. Walker.

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Lyn Paul 17 January 2015

Loved it Zoila as I have bought these from shopping centres for gifts. Have never made. Then to see this newspaper article, I was very impressed. Excellent article. Great picture too! !

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