Conscience Poem by Zoila T. Flores


Rating: 4.1

Conscience, don't abandon me,
Through my journey, on this day,
Keep supporting, as you're always,
On the wisdom, of my say.

Conscience, don't rely on me,
Because my soul, is not prepared,
On directing, to my people,
On their plans to be repaired.

Conscience, please forgive me,
To my morning, if you may,
If my eyes, refuse to open,
It's my soul that's in dismay.

Conscience, please assist me,
In the passage, through this world,
With a cheerful sense of spirit,
Making life, relish much more.

By A Paradise to your Soul by Zoila T. Flores (Amazon)

Monday, May 26, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: analogy,human life,spirituality,blind love,conscience
It's a tribute to all Veterans on this day. Zoila T. Flores
Edward Kofi Louis 10 July 2016

Through my journey! ! With my hope along the way. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Antony Theodore 16 May 2016

Conscience, please forgive me, To my morning, if you may, If my eyes, refuse to open, It's my soul, that's in dismay...... conscience that does not abandon me, conscience gives me strength. conscience leads me to a spiritual life....... a meditation on conscience. liked it very much. than ky ou. tony

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Chinedu Dike 13 May 2015

A good conscience is a continued celebration, its visits are like that of a mother-in-law whose visits never ends. It's a lovely poem, well articulated and nicely penned with insight. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Susan Williams 10 July 2016

Very nicely and sincerely written. I'm glad you shared this with us. It may be that this stage in history requires more and more of us to turn back to listening to our conscience.

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Michael Walker 10 July 2016

Very well thought out, and conscience is so important in day-to-day life.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 11 July 2017

Wonderful thoughts, indeed. Conscience is the compass for the life's journey. One may take every step in accordance with the compass and end up in success. Another may take denial steps to end up in devastation. Choice is always within oneself. Real eye opener to every non-conscientious person. Thanks for the gem of a poem. Congrats for being the member's PoD.X

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 July 2017

Congratulations! Yes, you are right. Conscience never abandons inner strength rather this helps to show light in journey of life. In the passage definitely conscience will assist you. This will give cheerful essence to life. An excellent poem very well crafted is shared here.....10

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 July 2017

Don't abandon me! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Seamus O Brian 10 July 2017

A finely crafted piece that hums along in a fine cadence with rhyming that enhances your theme. I enjoy how you disarticulate common expressions to retain a freshness, a series of unexpected linguistic detours whose dysrhythmic jolts contrast superbly with the meter and rhyme to keep the reader engaged. Bravo, and congratulations on POD.

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Tom Allport 10 July 2017

a poem of understanding the need to listen to the inner goodness that resides in all of us sometimes? .........well written.

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