My Shimmering Blind Spot Poem by Solomon Ramakgwa

My Shimmering Blind Spot

Love of my life, my shimmering blind spot,
A crimson haze clouding every vision.
My pulse falters—the heavy friction
Of a lonely soul meeting a heart uncorrupted.
We are currents entwined,
Like mountain veins of water bled into wine,
Flowing under the weight of high-altar vows.
Yet the filter of our devotion begins to strain,
Choked by the shadow of a third silhouette.
I offer you the steady stone of respect;
You crave the boundless ocean
Of unconditional love.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem explores the friction between profound devotion and the fundamental differences in how two people experience and express love.
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