My Struggle Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

My Struggle

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My struggle
Saturday,20th October 2018

The whole world is in trouble
despite my hard struggle
and great effort to go ahead
my hard work remained unread

neither anyonetook note of it
nor deemed fit
to greet me and appreciate,
on the contrary, they tried to vitiate

it pained from within
as my sincere effort wasn't seen
I was to rise high soon
despite the dark clouds appeared in the afternoon

I remained top on the peak
they couldn't digest or speak
their position remained weak
they had to face only bleakfuture

why should they fall crocodile's tears?
and show sheer
negligence on the humanity part
as it was only a good start in my life

Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta

My Struggle
Friday, October 19, 2018
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 October 2018

why should they fall crocodile's tears? and show sheer negligence on the humanity part as it was only a good start in my life Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 October 2018

When there is hard trouble this really provokes thought. The dark clouds appear with darkness and still we expect light of love, care and wisdom to get. Reaching up to the peak of success one day we can brighten up future. An excellent poem is beautifully penned.10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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