My Sweetheart Poem by aziz soubai

My Sweetheart

Rating: 4.5


When i am with her my heart starts beating
unable to stand the love i was seeking
She is the sweetest girl i have ever seen
a beautiful creature an awesome being.

Her eyes are sweet like a calm cool sea
always bright and stunning me
Her long blond hair like the sun
of its description i will never be done.

She is like a fresh morning flower
she is my darling my desire
I yearn to be with her every second
i wish we live together with no end.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 02 November 2014

A Thing Of Beauty Is A Joy Forever - John Keats. He that has won the love of a woman of virtue is blessed with a rare gem. A well articulated poem penned with conviction to capture the essence of the poet's love. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Ency Bearis 13 August 2008

sweetheart inspired our life...and sweet as sugar...nice write.. Ency Bearis

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