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My Life

Rating: 4.5

Is it my lot and my destiny
that life is so hard on me?
Am i to be living forever in misery
like a lost boat rocked by the sea?

Why i am always so sad and mad?
and in love my luck is so bad
No moments of happiness or joy
only loneliness since i was a boy.

With a relentless rope or a knife
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Ashraful Musaddeq 21 August 2008

Life is the way to go ahead, enjoyed.

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Dawn Slanker 06 August 2008

I normally don't care for poems about suicide or thoughts there of, but I have to say that I like this best of all your poems. The tone and words seem to come directly from the soul and I can actually feel what you are saying in this poem. Especially since we all, at some point in our lives, ask: 'Is it my lot and my destiny...' We can all relate. Good Job

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Eman Awad 01 August 2008

nothing new to be said, we all relate sadly to it but what's a bright side without a dark one? ? this poem is a great description of the dark side good work Eman Awad

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Greenwolfe 1962 01 August 2008

I found this to be a sad but poignant poem. The writer puy something of himself in this. This makes it worthy of my recommendation. GW62

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Daniel Allen 29 July 2008

I feel your pain. 'Death is my resort my haven my relief from that burden.' Death is not always as it seems...

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