David Taylor

Rookie (3rd January 1956 / LONDON, UK)

My Third Senryu - Poem by David Taylor

With a third stabbing
Hi'Ku lay bleeding near dead
still counting her breath.

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  • (10/10/2007 4:32:00 PM)

    Well if one must go like this, at least it will be after reading this....Stupid me, I haven't a clue what a Senryu is but than neither can I do a Haikus, at least knowing that it might be one. Dark but appealing, different from you..but, I like it. love, mm.xo (Report)Reply

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  • Ernestine Northover (10/10/2007 4:24:00 PM)

    Well, that's one way of putting it! ! ! How many other Haikus have to fall before you run out of Senryus?
    Very good one.
    Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 10, 2007

Poem Edited: Friday, April 15, 2011

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