With a third stabbing
Hi'Ku lay bleeding near dead
still counting her breath.
Well, that's one way of putting it! ! ! How many other Haikus have to fall before you run out of Senryus? Very good one. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Well if one must go like this, at least it will be after reading this....Stupid me, I haven't a clue what a Senryu is but than neither can I do a Haikus, at least knowing that it might be one. Dark but appealing, different from you..but, I like it. love, mm.xo