My Time Poem by Kamal Lalwani

My Time

Rating: 3.8


hold on
hold on, until u reach to the end
no matter how stupid u have been,
but now its the time
the time to hold on until your dreams come true,

make your self strong
u r the only one to make them come true,
be ready to kick some asses and
the right time is when u realize it,
'its the time'
no time is better than this time,
just end what u stared,
after that u can rest in peace
as long as u want to be in

look in your own eyes
u will see your own madness within it
live the life in it,
because no time is better than this
'this is it'
prove it to yourself that u r the man
the man of steel,
the man with the blood thirst in his eyes
for his enemies,
remember them and
and remember to beat them all,
make them fall into the pit of darkness
the one in which u lived-in

your true friend is you own
lets end what now u began,
its the time to test your might
its the time which is right.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vipins Puthooran 18 December 2011

[Dreams are prime of life] A good poem! !

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Nishtha Datta 10 December 2011

'look in your own eyes u will see your own madness within it live the life in it, because no time is better than this 'this is it'' nice lines........ nice write buddy.... great going, shine high**

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Dave Walker 10 December 2011

A great poem, dreams can come true. A great write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, Justice Of The external Mind.

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Kamal Lalwani

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Jaipur, India
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