nimal dunuhinga

Rookie - 151 Points (19, April,1951 / kalubovila East, Sri Lanka)

My Tiny Alert Alarm Clock - Poem by nimal dunuhinga

I spent few pennies to buy her from the nearest garage sale.
Anyway she wake me up in time and send me to struggle to get few oxygen for my patchy lungs.
I am so sorry my dear that I have promised you to buy a can of rust remover (WD-40) for your birth day from my next salary,
That I'll do definitely.
The auspicious day will come one day and you cannot wake me up again anymore,
Then you can have the utmost rest forever!


To my loving brother and best friend 'Lalith' who taught me to read and write and lot of things about the fading life...........et cetera.,


Comments about My Tiny Alert Alarm Clock by nimal dunuhinga

  • (4/15/2008 8:09:00 PM)


    Nimal, This is adorable - you combine gentle irony and self-deprecation to bring a smile to this reader's lips. A delightful poem. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ (Report) Reply

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  • (4/14/2008 8:37:00 PM)


    Original, amusing and charming. I like this one very much.

    Warm regards,

    Sandra
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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 14, 2008

Poem Edited: Wednesday, April 16, 2008


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