My Tour Poem by NEETHA SASIDHARAN

My Tour

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We are going for tour
without any rule.
We will be going at morn
without any snore.
We will be going by bus
without any mess.
We will be playing games
without any aims.
We will be seeing a bear
without any fear.
We will be very happy
but never a messy

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

expeditions are awesome, give that you have people or conditions meant for it. nice expression in simple language.

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Sajna Kailas 20 January 2012

nice poem Neetha! holiday mood! the rhyme scheme is awesome yar! I can see the excitement for going tour with friends :) keep it up yar! ! ! ! !

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Rekha Mandagere 05 January 2012

It must be a nice tour then. Must have enjoyed it :) Nice thought and feelings.

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Hemchandra Dutta 05 November 2011

...too simple to name it a recent poem!

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